Ouch, hard critics bro. Much better though, this truly deserves 5 stars. The Intro with Lava Man was also kid story bookish which was great for an introduction of him as with what ya did with acid tree which went as I said the last time well, and then you went all good drawin skills n shit and it really over fit in awesome as a whole. I was amazed at how quick ya came out with it, as badblood pointed out the actual animation techniques in flash that you used were of the easier variety but not only did you use them wisely in a cinamatic sense to add to it, the quickness ya used to make it showed you are competent at making flash videos and basic camera angle techniques, Now once again it did seem a lil short, over all you should aim to make a 2:00 min song and animate the whole thing, but this did have a feel of closure so props for that. making the song and animating it takes lots of skills, which you no doubt have, but take your time on a new one, Id love to see what pop then and dont let the negitive comments or scores get ya down, You make awesome flashes and music, and they'll only get better with time